Introduction

Introduction

A Chapter by 李[A]

Winds blow in patterns in alignment to Fates; to run against such fate, is to be at impasse. At such deadlock, the Fates accelerate the corruption of infertility. To become animate at the insignia, one must live with the wind.


© 2011 李[A]


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I like it, it's a nice start.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

not really sure i understand what you're trying to say but it sounds good

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting, if just a little over-complicated! I like the colour effects.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice,
but dont try to use hard words
when you might not fully get them.. or everyone else in here
and its nice to have a difficult word once in a while, but your overdoing it,
go for a wider audience, that they can find the (or have the chance too!!) meaning of those words in the context...
nice prolugue though
but you should make it longer, or more interesting.. doesnt leave me wanting for more, but then again, ill continue :D

Posted 12 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Hey! I'm A. (figure out the rest of the letters :P). Anyways, I'm a sixteen year old boy who normally doesn't write that much, but hey, I'm practicing vocabulary and writing skills at once so why not .. more..

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