Smiles

Written at age 8.

When you smile really big, 

that is called your 100% smile.

Smiles can be big

and some smiles are small.

Smiles are sweet,

and your smiler is sweeter.

Your 100% smile is sweet,

but your 200% smile is really sweet.

If you smile at someone,

they will smile back. 

Author's Note

Obviously this isn't a scholarly poem, but take from that what you will... just remember I was 8.

Reviews

[floira]

the poem is good. but what is ur age now ???

[Amelia May]

I am 20 now

[floira]

the poems cool. can u read my poems and tell me how they are? please?? ur work is so amazing maybe u can help me improve. if u cant find my poems on this website (cuz there are so many other writer. i have an account on this website though) please go to http://creativecrazzy.blogspot.in/

[sinNsincerity]

This is so cute will remind me to keep on smiling!

[Amelia May]

Thank you very much.

[Reese7674]

i like this one since you were only 8 that is really good..i myself got into poems like 9th grade so it's been a while for me also..

[Amelia May]

I have always had a strong passion for poetry. However, I am more into editing now. Thus why I have only been posting poems that I wrote years ago.

[Ali-Money-Ha]

Amelia, this is really cute and very inspiring that you have known your passion for so long :)

[Amelia May]

i appreciate your review. I have journals full of poems from throughout my life. I have always enjoyed poetry.