God Bless America

God Bless America

 

World can say, whatever they think

or want, we are born free and ruled

them all, a land blessed by the Lord

our motto is simple, in God we trust

 

We welcome all religions, respect them

believe in equality, humanity we care

provide asylum to those who need

a land chosen by God, to make him proud

 

Our men and women in uniforms are

the bravest from all, we don't forget

enemy we find, even we have to invade

a foreign country, we hunt them down

 

Donations, aids and charities we provide

still those countries treat us like ungrateful wives

we stand with weak, fight most evil enemies

which are barbarians, untamed beasts and freaks

 

Lord be with our leaders, give wisdom to all

let all of us be united, like one strong family

we are proud to be Americans, because

in freedom we believe, God bless America

 

Till there is sun, moon and stars, I pray to God

my flag stay on top, until the end of time let USA

be blessed with Prosperity, one strong united nation

the leader of the world, hear my little prayer my Lord!

 

A. Amos

Author's Note

Happy 4th of July

Reviews

[Morgan Storms]

I like that this view is positive. So many people complain about how terrible it is. I am always like, yes no one is perfect and the past was unfair and unkind, but we are moving in the right direction. And look at the rest of the world. There's so much disease, famine, genocide, infanticide, war and poverty! I tell people that we are spoiled. They have no idea what harsh conditions are ad are lucky to not have bombs blowing up innocent homes and kids. Thanks for writing.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Morgan...

[Ma'at]

very patriotic and stayed true to how much we believe in our country, no matter what others say and what happens within us.
very nice.
-GS

[A. Amos]

Thank you my dear...

[Mary Ochoa]

Such a beautiful and free write! I really enjoyed this read:) Thank you for sharing Amos!

[A. Amos]

Thank you Mary and welcome back, I miss reading your work and you my buddy. Hope all was great.

[Mary Ochoa]

You are very welcome Amos!... Thank you for such kind words! That means a lot to me. Miss you Buddy! :) Hope all was great with you as well.

[A. Amos]

Great and good to know that, glad your back and looking forward to read some of your magical work:)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you. Through my time away I was seeking inspiration to continue writing and not lose confidence. Being back makes me feel ready to share and grow. I looked forward to reading your work again. Such an enjoyment like always:) You're truly a great buddy who believes in my writing. Thank you.

[A. Amos]

Because writing is a gift a responsibilty to help and guide others, same time mend their broken hearts and provide them entertainments from your work. Take full charge and keep creating the magic you were born for! I'm always here for you and you know that buddy:)

[Mary Ochoa]

Thank you so much buddy! I feel so lucky to have such an inspirational friend like yourself to have so much confidence in my writing. Taking charge in my work I shall do:)

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome and trust me its likewise...

[DKLaw]

this invokes the American spirit. Very nice :)

[A. Amos]

Thank you DKLaw...

[Pure Innocence]

WHOO! Proud to be an American! Great write!

[A. Amos]

Thank you my friend....

[Rache David]

i'm not an american..
yet I still love your country.. really..
your poem said it all...
it's brilliant...

[A. Amos]

Thank you Rachel and I love yours:)

[Rache David]

i'm glad you liked it..
you're really good in writing huh.. :-)

[Sharon Kim]

I love your patriotism! Very well said! I particularly like the flow of the fourth paragraph.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Sharon...

[Michael G. Smith]

Proud to be an American even when it's uncool. The spirit of God frees men but government shackles them. I'd rather be free than secure.

[A. Amos]

Thank you Michael G...

[Natalie Dieudonne]

A very patriotic piece my friend. It truly shows the love and appreciation you have for this country.
Nice work buddy!

[A. Amos]

Thank you Buddy...

[Julia Alex]

This piece is amazingly written A, and highly Patriotic...which is highly required nowadays. I truely respect your emotions and feelings, this shows how much you love your country. Happy 4th!!!

[A. Amos]

Thank you Julia

[Julia Alex]

You're welcome Sir!

[Glen Yumang Manese]

All you need is a set of fireworks...
and you're finale is good to go here...
a commemorative write with this one...

[A. Amos]

Thank you Glen...

[Glen Yumang Manese]

yr welcome...