Excel To Death

" When you loose a soul mate..... a best friend..... a mom.'

 

 

 

I laid down where your soul died today

I looked around and found no one

Hurry for the blood is getting closer

 

Each breath becomes harder to excel

Eternity has stolen my last will

For your love I will have no more

 

Can you not hear me screaming

Why can you not be my friend

Please give your soul back

 

The bells ring though I fear them

The darkness I see not the light

The clock has stopped at no time

 

The heart has gave the last beat

The passion gave way to darkness

Death joined two souls forever

 

-Excel To Death

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

The sting of death and loss rings loudly here. You have one emotional pen, my dear. Superb!

[TL Boehm]

a haunting, lonely poem - it put a lump in my throat and an ache in my heart.