Birth of a flower

Birth of a flower

A Poem by Anata
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A flower is born ..

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Lurking from behind

Green silky leaves

Shy as they are

Hiding, and waiting to reveal true beauty

 

As the first rays of sun

Touch their soft pale masquerade

It grows inside

Hiding, and waiting to reveal true beauty

 

The warmth of early spring

Has softened their heart

Slow but steady they start

Waiting to reveal true beauty

 

As a butterfly pops from it cocoon

They find their way out

Shaking off their pale looks

Waiting to reveal true beauty

 

Radiant colors

And tantalizing scents

No disguise nor shame

A flower is born

 

© 2008 Anata


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This is great, I do agree the font is a little funky my eyes went a bit skewiff. I really enjoyed this particularly
As the first rays of sun
Touch their soft pale masquerade
It grows inside
Hiding, and waiting to reveal true beauty
I love the word masquerade. Fab! Sam x

Posted 16 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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A beautiful read, flowers are so much like babies, they grow to reveal such beauty inside, its amazing. You captured that beauty with your words, beautiful XX

Posted 16 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.

It really opens up like a blossom, layer for layer ... Radiant colour and tantalising words, no disguise nor shame, a poem is born ... lovely.

Posted 16 Years Ago


8 of 8 people found this review constructive.


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Anata
Anata

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