"Thursday Kinda Day..."

"Thursday Kinda Day..."

A Poem by Chris
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“Thursday Kinda Day…”

 

Major puppy dog eyes being batted here...


leap, leap...duh,


which way did she go duh,

which way did she ...go...this way?!?


Leap leap...Here?!?

leap leap...


There...Where?!?

Awwww man…  WHERE?!?


H’lo H’lo…

H’lo….

Can’t ya come out’n play?

Awwwwwww cooooooooooooooommmmme ooonnn

Comeoncomeoncomeon


Leap Leap Leap…


Wagwagwag…bodybodybodywag


- oh the things we do for attention… sigh -


Leapleapsomersault - leap …ouch

Rollroll…leap

PLOP!! HAH-a-HAH-a-HAH-a-HAH


…sheesh already…

'boutdamntime!

 

Chris

 

© 2013 Chris


Author's Note

Chris
feel free AFTER you think on it...
there is ALWAYS something within the lines when you think on them ya know? Still, it somehow doesn't feel like Pulitzer material though - chuckling here

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What do you mean, maybe not Pulitzer? The picture was so clear (maybe because I have an enormous, doofy dog, and I read the whole thing in 'her voice') and made me smile! I own a dog like this, and I think I know some people like this (maybe I'm one of them?). And I suppose I'm getting ahead of myself saying it's a dog - that's what it made me think of immediately, but it doesn't have to be - like I said, I know some people like this, too. These little day-to-day moments are what life is worth living for.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Execute love,
Beautiful pen work,
Like it much.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Chris

9 Years Ago

is a "view" of reality - common to the human fraility
here is where i went---and i am an old dog, so i bring the human element in concerning relationships.

this could be a relationship where the man is older, the woman younger. And what might have happened is that she decided in mid-stream to sow her wild oats...perhaps she was just restless like a puppy will be all the time, and go off wagging her tail at other men for awhile, but finally she tires out, and realizes who really takes care of her, and comes back to rest in his lap.

okay, crazy...i know...but you know i always see something different---

jacob

Posted 9 Years Ago


Chris

9 Years Ago

a sweet view, Jacob... especially of bodywags... chuckling here ...girls/women and boys/men do it - .. read more
Aww, this is cute! Puppy love!
I love animals and this reads like the unconditional love of a puppy or dog.
Or it could be that teenage boy that has a crush on me.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Chris

9 Years Ago

yep...could be...
This made me miss the dogs I had to put up for adoption when I left Arkansas and moved back to Michigan after I lost my husband a year ago. They were always ready to go walking but when I was...no...they wanted all my attention...and of course the dog treats they knew I always had handy. Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


haha! I personally loved it! Awesome job:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Dog mind is a terrible thing to waste. Thanks.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Ah yes, those puppy dog eyes. They work wonders.


Beccy. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Any friend of a puppy/dog/cat is a BIG friend of mine. This reminded me of the time my bassett hound had 12 puppies...12 puppies, nothing but ears coming at you on the floor!

Oh, the joys they give us! You captured the love so well, Chris!

Posted 9 Years Ago


This piece radiated joy, i enjoy your unorthodox approach of writing. A fine piece this is.
Very enjoyable.

Well Done.
Thank you.
Angad

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Chris

Lansing, MI



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