"Exciting..."

thought-full

So many WANT exciting... so few KNOW what it is...

"Exciting..."

Is exciting - wanting more

knowing less

touching

being touched

-thinking of touching or

just what?

Is it - new

or Old - with the Cap intended!

Is it finally finding

a real smile - inside

that leaks out on its own?

Is it the colors 

of the rainbow,

the flecks within eyes,

the sunshine caressing your skin,

the tastes of tomorrows

you only dreamed of before?

Is exciting having

a tomorrow afterall?

A time or experience

you can have and share,

a reason to share at all?

You excite me you know -

careful, I bite.

Chris

Author's Note

feel free

Reviews

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

Exciting is wonderful and can be so after many years. You bite hehehe :)

[Chris]

always have...and I always warn ...sometimes a person will almost listen

[NANCY MCCORMACK]

I do believe many want exciting but do not know what they have, I do.

[Bowers]

As much as I fear the bite,
here I am, with my own point of view.
My excitement...
Is found in my dreams,
I find hope, and that is where
I find my excitement.
A great write!

[Mary]

I like the exasperation expressed in the first question, which ends in a stondee metric.
I'm still trying to interpret the last line. I will read it a few more times. ;)

Me too.

[Penlady]

...coming upon a smile that reflects feelings shared, not yet spoken, the words mere token of the being overwhelmed...such delight, the lightness of heart....

[Chris]

Barb, where ya been for so long!?!

[Penlady]

I wrote you a message... Right off the bat, I'm loving it all...your writing..

[Chris]

I like having you here

[Penlady]

Good, I like being here! Thanks! happy new Year...new beginnings...

[Nickolaye Vincent]

Is it the colors of the rainbow, the flecks within eyes, the sunshine caressing your skin, the tastes of tomorrows, you only dreamed of before.
This is by far my favorite line. I will keep this close to me. Thank you sir Chris, for having written this masterpiece.
---NV

[Frieda P]

Ha, go ahead bite me, maybe I'll like it. ;-) I'll settle for normalcy at this stage of the game, whatever that might be..................

[Lyn Anderson]

This is an awesome piece. I have read and re-read it some more. I like it more each time I do.

[Emily B]

i don't mind the biting

so very few excite me, but you know the way there so easily

[Baby Ricochet]

Excitement means different things to folks." a real smile that leaks out on its own" I love that line. Thank you Chris. You are a true bard.

[Ruth]

Through each woven thought...there is always a belter of provoking energy at the end...but then your writing never ends...it spins and spins within the mind taking on many faces and emotions...quite honestly...I am left awhirl xx