"Living The Tontine..."

"Living The Tontine..."

A Poem by Chris
"

A new year...

"

“Living The Tontine…”

 

Memories so often test our realities -

with noon "midnights",

and midnight "sunrises".

 

The yearly "missing friends" toasts

don't get longer but the memories...

the memories take more consciousness

and the "stare" -

the thousand-yard stare

draws me to the abyss

and silently holds me captive

as all the hands beckon, reach, and wave -

until it’s my turn to join them.

 

Chris

© 2024 Chris


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A deep abstract poem, amazing way you reflect and muse here. Kudos!!

Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.

Posted 3 Months Ago


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Aye, we live our youth attending christening and weddings this continuing until all of a sudden the Sunday best only worn, and worn more often , to attend the funerals of those we love and care for. This no doubt until the day our Sunday best worn for our own.
Not a big fan of all things new year celebrations as each one is another step closer to the hole in the ground.
Had to Google tontine...it's good to learn at least one thing each day :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


Chris

4 Months Ago

I read Costain's book - way back when. For me a Tontine is a unique way to describe life and all it.. read more
A nice self analysing poem. A psychological approach. Good one .

Posted 4 Months Ago


Chris

4 Months Ago

I appreciate your pause and words.

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Added on January 6, 2024
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