"If All You Wore Was A Smile..."

A quiet Monday thought

"If All You Wore Was A Smile..."

The sun is so pale and
the moon so soft - aglow
as
  they highlight with lil shadows
  each small hollow, rise,
  your heart-full curves -
  my soul-full dreams.

You've ever echoed in my life
and touched so deeply
that even wishes pause
  ...get lost -
just looking in your eyes.

If I touched your cheek
  I'ld never stop...
nor remember how being
me
- without you,
ever was...

Chris
 

Author's Note

Mondays...

Reviews

[Pi Cee]

This is one of the most stunningly lovely pieces my eyes have ever touched....

[Wendy Seames Garner]

Hauntingly beautiful...

[Emily Rae]

this is beautiful, I especially adore the last of it when you write, "nor remember how being
me
- without you,
ever was..."

[Penlady]

Rereading again and find it even more stunning than the first time. Your poetry is like little gifts strewn through life and found as surprises.

[Penlady]

Oh, all Mondays should be marked like this. How wonderful!

[bookworm]

I really like your style Chris...your experience in poetry shines through in every verse. You have a simple ease in bringing the reader into your world. The pleasure was mine here. Thank you.

[TPK Stories]

Just beautiful....

[Cassie Fraga]

**sighs** hahaha!! ima gonna pretend you wrote this one just for me...
**cheeeeeeeze** that was just beautiful!! simply beautiful!!

[sharonlee]

Touches deep... very deep.

Shar