Vivacities

Vivacities

A Poem by AndBeForgotten

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Almond windows of intelligentsia

Clandestine, Covert

Limitless imaginings

Adventurist temperaments

Pale and futile

These Ivory feats

Light and bright white smile lines

Pink and gold flecked

Cheeks

Shutter sounds reverberate

A Coolly hiding disposition

 

 

© 2009 AndBeForgotten




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Are you intelligentsia ? Hiding behind almond windows ?
You are intellectually extraordinary .
Just teasting and I dont think you hide anywhere, you are
a very up front, forth right girl.
Your poem does seem a bit obscure. Perhaps that is because
I am not a poet.
Obscure or lighted by spot, it is a delightful poem written in
a stylized fashion,
Beautifully done. Thank you for sharing .

Rated: 100 %

------ Eagle Cruagh

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago


The allusion you make in the first line is nicely done. I like how you carry the idea though the entirety of the piece. I must admit that the piece was a bit hard to follow the first time through, but a second read cleared things up. I'm not sure that I like the single word lines, but other than that this piece was well done.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Everything I write is to glorify God. So maybe its not the most technical, or well written...but its what He gives me, and anything He gives me is more then enough. "I praise you because I am fear.. more..

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