Solar Particle Eyes

Solar Particle Eyes

A Poem by AndBeForgotten

It means too many things to describe. Its my soul on paper


Pairs of vaporizing and surmising lies

Purely expressive, arousing and subjectively nice

Teaching unassuming, wordy and supposable

Looking downward, a spiraling unknowable


Circumstantial celerity in retrospect

Distinguishing alkaline interconnecting


Vilonia heart strung emotions in me

 Atomistic theories break the falling

Harbored silica, crystalline dementia



Musings replicate the way I differentiate


Anointed hands clasp dispirited

Sinner’s remorse, drifting dreamily blight

Darkness comes high, sinking not a bit

Breathing down my throat and soaking up my life

Drifting in machine simulated existence

Dial in the rain and push down all the paining

Pale and gray tainted resistance

A veneer of shining contempt


© 2011 AndBeForgotten

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wow. deep very deep. I love the way that the rhythm flowed and the title definitely suits it well because to me, the word choices are "out there," but you connect it and bring it back, which is the point. thanks for sharing :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

i like your word choice

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very interesting. I love the imagery, as Greg said, it's very abstract. I like how you separated some of the words in the first stanza so that they held a bit more weight. You have talent, nice work!


Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice poem! Full of abstract imagery and wonderfully descriptive expressions! Thank You for sharing!

Posted 10 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on April 28, 2009
Last Updated on May 3, 2011




Everything I write is to glorify God. So maybe its not the most technical, or well written...but its what He gives me, and anything He gives me is more then enough. "I praise you because I am fear.. more..


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