Breathless

Amazingly I didn't write this about sex, but about more complicated personal things...

Sleepless nights, breathless ambiance we produce

A Human Origami triangle of two, whispering I love you, in the dark.

Pulling away, emotions breathe away the air stuck between the sheets

I can’t get enough of our ferocious animosity

Leave all the stagnate temperaments in rags, 

To the floor—we’re birthing life and a new skin

A paradox thing we’ve made here

verbal inflections taking over, empower-ing

Look how they sway here, Look how we’ve made it

Breathe, breathe in every drop

Suck in skies to materialize—our faith

Pulling away, emotions breathe away, turning you

In..side..out

 

 

Reviews

[Eagle Cruagh]

The vigor, energy and steam you put in to your
writing pushes the rest of us to come up to this
level .
Your seductive power is sensational.
Another great piece.

Rated: 100 %

----- Eagle Cruagh

[Lexi Nicole]

I love this. You put so much emotion into it and really instilled a sense of pure love. Great write!

-Howl

[Ralphy]

wow, this is some write, how exotic and passionate. What an awesome way to describe the act of love. Do I dare tell you I was feeling it, lying on the floor breathless, or tell you I could hear the words reverbrating from her lips...wow, this is some write.