Invincible

I wrote this in school

We all been there.

We all been there so many times.

So many times that you wish you were dead.

If we all been there, then just...................leave it.

If you don't leave it, it'll know that you can't leave it alone so it'll keep on coming.

If they don't know the real you then stop hanging with them.

I know the feeling I've been there.

If you feel unwanted, don't be friends with them.

You might feel Invincible.

But their are other people who knows how you feel.

If you keep your head down, you'll miss out on importent things.

If you keep your head up, you'll see who your true friends are.

So don't feel invincible and keep your head up. :)

Author's Note

ignore grammar problems (thought there might of been grammars)

Reviews

[Great Aunt Astri]

I think this is a good study on 'vulnerableness' You have good insight!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you Mrs. Astri

[Eddie Phillips]

I always tell my friends "Keep your head up." Life is a struggle. You will feel invincible at times when you are really vulnerable. Never mistake confidence for pride. I get the meaning of your poem and I love the message. Keep your head up! Life may hit you ut it will never knock you down.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

Keeping your head up in times of turmoil can be tough. I've spent many a day wallowing away my worries and pain in bed, in the darkness, unwilling to emerge for even food. Depression and darkness is a scary thing, and they can grab hold of you if you aren't careful. You must hold on to the beauty in life and to the things that are good and just.

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

Yes we gotta keep our heads up, because that is when we also find new opportunities. And I agree, sometimes we have to let go of some people or groups of people that bring us down.

Good Job

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

thank you :)

[iliOZ]

seems to me you think before you talk
i am glad you have a talent for both

(what grammar problems? :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

i thought there might

[Holly Mason]

head is up young man
always inspirational aren't you
to grasp the needs of others at such a young age is gift truly
and you cherish it well
like your content
and love your title
thank you much for sharing

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

and thank you for reviewing :)