Invincible

Invincible

A Poem by Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
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I wrote this in school

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We all been there.

We all been there so many times.

So many times that you wish you were dead.

If we all been there, then just...................leave it.

If you don't leave it, it'll know that you can't leave it alone so it'll keep on coming.

If they don't know the real you then stop hanging with them.

I know the feeling I've been there.

If you feel unwanted, don't be friends with them.

You might feel Invincible.

But their are other people who knows how you feel.

If you keep your head down, you'll miss out on importent things.

If you keep your head up, you'll see who your true friends are.

So don't feel invincible and keep your head up. :)

© 2013 Andrew (MJ) Nugteren


Author's Note

Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
ignore grammar problems (thought there might of been grammars)

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I think this is a good study on 'vulnerableness' You have good insight!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

thank you Mrs. Astri
I always tell my friends "Keep your head up." Life is a struggle. You will feel invincible at times when you are really vulnerable. Never mistake confidence for pride. I get the meaning of your poem and I love the message. Keep your head up! Life may hit you ut it will never knock you down.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
Keeping your head up in times of turmoil can be tough. I've spent many a day wallowing away my worries and pain in bed, in the darkness, unwilling to emerge for even food. Depression and darkness is a scary thing, and they can grab hold of you if you aren't careful. You must hold on to the beauty in life and to the things that are good and just.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
Yes we gotta keep our heads up, because that is when we also find new opportunities. And I agree, sometimes we have to let go of some people or groups of people that bring us down.

Good Job

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

thank you :)
seems to me you think before you talk
i am glad you have a talent for both

(what grammar problems? :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

i thought there might
head is up young man
always inspirational aren't you
to grasp the needs of others at such a young age is gift truly
and you cherish it well
like your content
and love your title
thank you much for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

8 Years Ago

and thank you for reviewing :)

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Andrew (MJ) Nugteren
Andrew (MJ) Nugteren

Crystal Beach, CA



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Hey,I'm Andrew Nugteren (People Call me Michael Jackson)! I'm 18 years old! I like to read Fan fiction books and I like writing poems. I enjoy comic books, and hanging out with my friends. I have a do.. more..

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