A li’ll description of wat I fink of u . . . *[[“xXx”]]*

A li’ll description of wat I fink of u . . . *[[“xXx”]]*

A Poem by Angel
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Dedicated to the most amazing person in my life Forever loving you . . . xXx

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Babeii boii u made mii luv too strong.

Ur luv is mii drug which u got me addicted to,

Ur makin me fink ur to gd to b tru,

Can't let go of wat I'm feeling for u.

Luv to strong kinda out of control,

Feel mii heart hear it go.

Beats ur name when you whisper in my ear,

"I LOVE YOU" boii u know what I luv to hear.

Just thinkin bout u drives me insane,

hearin mii name on ur lips r keeping me sane. 

Loving you forever,

together till the end.

Ur name, an imprint on mii heart,

was in luv wid u frm da very start. 

Can’t help myself if I lose control.

lemme get under your skin,

I know all mii thoughts r thoughts of sin.

But dats how u make me feel.

Though I can’t get enough,

plz gimme all u got.

Lemme treat u right,

even if it takes all night.

I’ll make u breathles,

cuz boii u make me feel blessed.

Lemme make ur day,

I’ll take it all da way.

You’re da kinda guy who’s precious and tru,

don’t eva wanna fink of losin u because

"your the best thing thats ever been mine"

A li’ll description of wat i fink of u . . . *[[“xXx”]]*

 

 

© 2011 Angel


Author's Note

Angel
You told me that you love me more than you did before
Well this is what I think of u . . . xXx

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very nice poem :) was a little difficult to read with the slang words but i figured it out just fine :) awesome work! keep writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


The poem doesn't use real words because it is in it's original state when I first wrote it sorry. Also usualy in teenage crush not much people use real words it's all about slang nowadays which is what I was demonstrating . . . xXx
sorry for the confusion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Please, plaese PLEASE use real words next time. Good job, but it was really distracting :(

Posted 13 Years Ago


The style is very unique, but can also be distracting from the poem itself. Like Millie said, consider putting more real words together. Still, I liked it and it was fun to read!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I love it but use real words next time.Xxx
I can say this you are my cousin
Love you hunny bun.xxxx

Posted 13 Years Ago



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