L.O.V.E. K.I.L.L.S. S.L.O.W.L.Y.

About love and what happens if it doesn't work out right

Life
Of
Very
Extraordinary feelings

Killing
Individuals
Little by
Little
Silently and

Slowly
Leaving
Only the
World to
Live
Years of sorrow

Author's Note

My perfume that I use has the words 'love kills slowly' above a skull, and that was how I got the idea. THANK YOU AMAZING SMELLING PERFUME!!! By the way, I didn't chose the perfume because of the skull ;)

Reviews

[IceWinifredd]

Nice poem. :) I'm gonna have to get my hands on this perfume thanx to you lol

[Angels heart]

YOU SHOULD!!!!!!! its amazing, i wear it ALL THE TIME!!!!!!!!!! ahem, sorry for that. thank you for the review, I'm glad you liked my poem ;)

[IceWinifredd]

You're very welcome and it's alright lol.

[Bluefire]

I love Ed. Hardy's designs, their awesome.
And this poem, nothing other than that title could possibly sum it up any better.
Well done!

[Angels heart]

Yes they are!!!
Thank you so much the idea hit me like a rock, you can't ignore the bruise it leaves ;)

[Bluefire]

xD You're welcome!

[Natalie Dieudonne]

This is a very interesting and cool way of writing.

Really nice :)

[Angels heart]

Thank you, I have never tried this kind of poetry. I'm just glad it turned out good :)

[Natalie Dieudonne]

You're welcome. Don't be afraid to test it out some more :)

[Angels heart]

I'll try!!! Thanks for the motivation

[Natalie Dieudonne]

Anytime :)

[Dark Princess]

It's weird how we find inspiration in the microscopic things. This is very clever and true.

[Angels heart]

We just have to look around us because even the small things are in the final picture. Than you for the review

[Dark Princess]

Exactly. Haha. Anytime

[Chidoriflower]

Concise, like little truthful daggers. Love the acronym. :)

[Angels heart]

Thank you, love is good and evil. I love your review ;p

[Angels heart]

In the good way

[Chidoriflower]

Haha cutie ;)

[Angels heart]

Flirt, total flirt

[Chidoriflower]

I can't help it; you're just so adorable!!!! ;)

[Hibiki]

Great writing!
Cool acronym...
I like it~ ^^

[Angels heart]

Thanks for the review, I'm was never REALY good at the naming letters thing but this worked out

[Saddam]

Love is not as you think too, you write about after effect when it fails.
But you write very well. It is like "smoke causea cancer" Great write dear. I like your idea.

[Angels heart]

I write like that because I haven't found 'him' yet. Thank you for the review, I give all my credit to my perfume bottle ;p

[Saddam]

It is little amazing- idea with a bottle. But great mind to capture so Good. Great.