White angel

This is the second part to the little room poem

Black and red all around
I spred my wings but all I see is black
One speck of white,
Does not catch the attention of the blind
I sit falling once again
No flying for me
White beams
Flowing streams of white
I see
An angel calls my name
I hear
White wings circle me
I fly
Higher and higher I go
I soar
A hand holds mine, strong, gental.
I feel
The angel takes me away
where I see
White
Where I feel
Grass all around
where I fly
wind blows through my long hair
where I am not alone
people like me surround
No
Black
Red
No falling
No alone
Not for this white winged angel.

Author's Note

I found the second part, I was so happy when I finally found it :)

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"Flowing streams of white
I see
An angel calls my name
I hear
White wings circle me "

Very descriptive and detailed. Excellent in all aspects...:)......

[Angels heart]

Thank you very much. I let the poems flow, and I guess whips is how they go! ;)

[Sami Khalil]

Yep. You are welcome...:).....

[Angels heart]

if you like this poem, I think you will like the first part to the poem, My Little Room! Please do read it and leave an review!!!

[Chris Micha]

Very good indeed! I really like the flow and format. Beautiful job! :)

[Angels heart]

Thank you!!!

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

WOW, this poem is simply amazing, great write.

Kaze~ :-D

[Angels heart]

Thank you kaze, I'm glad you liked it.

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

Your very welcome, it was my pleasure reading your poem. :-)

[Angels heart]

I'm so glad you enjoyed it ;)

[♔ CrownedDevil ☾]

I loved it. :-) ;-)

[Stephen]

Whao. Your an white angel oneself :) I love reading this poem. How beautifully you expressed the emotions...the feelings of yours through words is marvelous :)

I adore this poem. Keep writing!

[Angels heart]

Thank you so much, I'm glad you could understand! I will NEVER stop writing... Even if you cut off my hands I will find away. MUWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

[Stephen]

It's my pleasure to read an angel's poem :) Hahaha...pretty you just again make me laugh...well I will never cut off your beautiful white soft n thin scented hands cus your hands are made to be kissed not to get cut off :) Muwahaha

[Angels heart]

Lol again, cough cough, kiss up, cough cough

[Stephen]

Hahaha... your damn awesome ;) anyway...kiss up, honey n cough cough... kiss up kiss up cough cough :) haha

[Chidoriflower]

Oh my gosh this is so beautiful. It has so much hope and pureness...T.T I love it. So much. :')

[Angels heart]

Thank you, like always, I always love your reviews ;)

[Chidoriflower]

You're very welcome hon ;)

[Angels heart]

;) *blush intensely*

[Tinkerbellje]

The flow to this is really good, combined with the beautiful writing makes this a really good poem :-)

[Angels heart]

Thank you, I take poetry really seriously, so I'm glad you think that

[Saddam]

Where I feel
Grass all around
where I fly
wind blows through my long hair
where I am not alone
people like me surround.

A Good flow of write. Loved it dear.

[Angels heart]

Thank you so much, always looking forward to your truthful comments ;)

[Saddam]

smiles......