Surrender

 

Float with me upon these seas,

where beneath the shallow surface

the many dimensions of my yearning

are glistening stones, soft and smooth,

waiting to be rescued. 

 

Untie me with your truths,

untangle the manifestation

of this unrelenting desire

so that once again my body

may experience that sweet release

that comes only when our two souls meet.

 

Tell to me your secrets

so that I may share your dreams,

roam freely through the mists

that keep hidden your promises

and imprison your waiting heart.

Reviews

[Shane William]

Great write. reminds me of one of mine. It's quite a feeling we describe, eh?