I'll Be The One To Love You

I'll Be The One To Love You

A Poem by Anjali
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It's an expression of comforting the person you love to see beyond their pain and expressing your love for them.

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I'll Be The One To Love You Darling
I'll be the only one for you
It won't matter what you had in your past
For all that matters to me is your presence
Forget all that brings you down baby
I'll make you the queen of my heart darling
You simply can't put off yourself
Just because someone betrayed you
Coz I'm that person you were looking for completing your soul
God made us the soulmates
And left up to us to complete each other
So here we are but you seem so not altogether
Hence, I'll be the one to love you.

© 2017 Anjali


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Anjali
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The tenderness and gentle expression in this piece really made my heart melt, Anjali.
The idea of loving someone despite their pains is one I can relate to, and you've laid that sentiment so realistically and relatably upon the page. Thanks for sharing!

One suggestion: I think you could make this piece a bit more relatable if you took out words like "darling" and "baby." That way, the reader wouldn't have to necessarily interpret this piece as expressing romantic love.

- William Liston

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

2 Years Ago

Thank you William for your review and I'll consider your suggestion :)



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Really a heart melting poem. The love was very cute and you expression of words are very nice. I like to read more poem like this. Don't stop writing. All the best for your upcoming poetry.

Thanks and Regards

-mohamed rahim Iqbal.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

1 Year Ago

Thank you Mohamed Rahim Iqbal for your encouraging words.
Wonderful use of words for love. Gentle, kind and hopeful words shared. Thank you Anjali for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

1 Year Ago

Thank you Coyote for sharing your views on my poem.
Coyote Poetry

1 Year Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome my friend.
A sweet little piece about breaking down walls... Love is the best...!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

1 Year Ago

Thank you Silente for reviewing this poem.
Silente-Write

7 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
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heartfelt and passionately written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

2 Years Ago

Thank you Ashwin for your valuable review 🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏
The tenderness and gentle expression in this piece really made my heart melt, Anjali.
The idea of loving someone despite their pains is one I can relate to, and you've laid that sentiment so realistically and relatably upon the page. Thanks for sharing!

One suggestion: I think you could make this piece a bit more relatable if you took out words like "darling" and "baby." That way, the reader wouldn't have to necessarily interpret this piece as expressing romantic love.

- William Liston

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

2 Years Ago

Thank you William for your review and I'll consider your suggestion :)
touching and romantic .. i like the straight forward language ... reflecting on "life" in general i am not only uplifted by the love you write about but feel the tug of a warning when someone gets emotionally entwined with someone on the mend .. many times does not work out for the one trying "to be there" .. ;)
E.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

2 Years Ago

Thank you Einstein for those lovely words.
True love sees beyond mistakes and enlightens the future.
A strong and touching poem:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anjali

2 Years Ago

Thank you Neetha for the encouraging words :)
Neetha

2 Years Ago

My pleasure

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Anjali
Anjali

India



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