LAST GOODBYE

Let’s talk so soft 

the right of sense the warmth of touch

from millions miles distance you've come

millions hours waiting my soul is numb

do you know i never change?

Do you stay the same?

Let’s hug so tight

this feeling is deep the moment is right

my fingers move through your hair

don’t you know how much i care?

Your embrace is so hot

do you miss me a lot?

Let’s dance so close

thanks for the jasmine thanks for the rose

we know we beg this love for more

but you are not mine anymore

for someone has won your heart

feels like wounded with thousands darts

Let’s kiss so sweet

tastes like for ages we don’t meet

i know you still love me

and i wait for you till i die

dreaming you are back in my arms

keeping this love and leaving no harm

Let’s forgive and forget

forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad

forgetting our love story we should not regret

I wish I could erase the date first time we met

Let’s say goodbye

we must desert it and never asking why 

I look after this feeling in dainty

I keep your name in my solitary

if someday I’ll meet you in another destiny

would you remember me?

Reviews

[Fernando Dardón]

Wow.... I must tell, I almost cried with this beautiful piece...
It touched my feelings, my heart, my soul. It described what I once felt, and what I still feel.
I love Its rhythm, it's so melancholic and soothing at the same time. Its sad, deep and breathless.
I certainly would dedicate this poem to that very special girl which I once I held hands.
I certainly would use this poem as lyrics, cause there is a magical, realistic, sadly true and romantic sound.
I certainly would qualify this poem as one of my favorite (since this very moment).
I specialy loved this lines:

"Let’s forgive and forget
forgiving my deepest love that makes you sad
forgetting our love story we should not regret
I wish I could erase the date first time we met"

It remembers me so many things, because I once thought that too. That maybe it would have been better never knowing her...
In other words, I feel so identified with this poem.

CONGRATULATIONS!!!!

Fernando

[Anita Singh]

WOW! Fernando, my dear friend. I am so glad to know that my poem stirred so many beautiful emotions in you. What can i say? I am humbled. It makes me sad too that you regret knowing her and going too far. Just know my dear friend that you can always share your feelings, your thoughts about it (just like you did now) if you want to. You can count on me, buddy.
Lots of love.
Anna

[sakshi arora]

I really don't like love poems so much but this one is like an opera and so elegant

[Anita Singh]

Hey, Sakshi! Thank you for dropping by to read my work!

[New Theory]

Beautiful lovely lines, anabella needs a poems compilation book published, this is so good I love it.

[Anita Singh]

Woah! Thanks, man! That's so sweet of you! You bring a smile on my face :)

[New Theory]

You are welcome :)

[gabrielle]

What i like in this piece is that the words flow smoothly. Ah, poignant write annabelle.

[Anita Singh]

Thanks, Gab! :)

[melissa]

This is amazing poem keep up the great work and keep them coming

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for reading and liking my work, Melissa!

[melissa]

Your welcome

[DIVYA]

So touching I could think of nothing but the sadness and futility of it all. There s not much that can be done when someone's love for us dies. No hope at all. Just ifs and more ifs. Excellent poem Anabella.

[Anita Singh]

Thanks, Divya. Good to hear from you. Hope you are keeping well these days. :)

[Ecoolarg]

love how optimistic yet honest, like a past due to finish before trying to claim to the same perfect situation. I enjoy it very much, thanks for posting it

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for reading my work! :)

[icelandicblue]

A very poignant piece of writing. I like the question at the end it adds to the plaintive mood of the poem.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for stopping by, Blue. Isn't that a question we should be asking in relationships? Kind of lets us know where we stand.

[Avinash]

A dignified goodbye really puts a permanent stop to the vicious cycle of a dead relationship.
Wish you best.

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Avi.

[Savannah Bly]

This is a beautifully sad and memorable poem! Imagery was spot on. Well done!

[Anita Singh]

Thank you, Savannah!
:) Anna

[Scott Metro]

A sad ending to such beauty...
All the love of life and the soul of another...gone.

Enjoyed it.
Scott

[Anita Singh]

Thank you for reading my work, Scott!!! :)

[Scott Metro]

:)
Scott......