Quiet A-loud

A strong feeling ... to discard all the negativity and frustrations ...

Quiet A-loud 

I wanna shout 

Quiet A-loud ...

Under the ocean of my hell 

I wanna 

Exhale out all my breath , all around ,

My brain ... and expel all out ,

Quiet A-loud 

Above the heaven ...

Far beyond my expectations 

My frustrations 

Wanna crate it all and , 

explode all out ...

Quiet A-loud

                                        -Anushka Joshi ...

Author's Note

Read and Review .... hope you loved it ...

Reviews

[barleygirl]

The best part of this poem is your inventive contrasting title-phrase, repeated thru-out to strong effect. Quiet-a-loud reminds me of how I feel when my wilderness solitude is made ugly with noisy power tools & four-wheelers tearing up & down the hills loudly. People don't respect quiet. They come from towns & cities where there's always background noise & they cannot enjoy the outdoors without making noise like shooting guns a hundred times in a row. It makes me as frustrated as this poem sounds. But I also realize your poem is about the public discourse these days, with everyone complaining & criticizing & disrespecting others. It's so bad out there, I just want to be alone in my peaceful life without all that noise! Nicely original way to express what we are all feeling (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you ma'am 😊 for understanding my feelings so greatly

[Sairaa ...]

Everytime I read this , I love this

[Aradhana]

emotions are clear and words can be felt. But i can't help but notice that wanna was repeatedly used which in some way can be prevented as it spoils the fluidity of the poem and it is not taken in the way it should and also the main subject is neglected...Overall it is a gr8 work.

[Fay Slimm]

A frustrated outcry making itself heard through your splendid use of an inspiring double-edged title. An engaging read.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you ma'am

[Neville]

I imagine most folk have days when they feel much the same.. nicely penned my friend :)

[Anushka joshi]

So nice of you to call me your friend I like such kind of persons who are so friendly and this is such a great platform where irrespective of any barrier so much love for each other is there ... thanks
Aj

[Neville]

my pleasure,

Neville

[Riya]

Nicely written and displayed true emotions. A relatable poem for many :)

[Anushka joshi]

Thanks a lot for your words riya
Aj.

[Riya]

Welcome :-)

[Riya]

Welcome :-)

[Sairaa ...]

Ma'am you are really very good at your writings !! I am strongly influenced by your thoughts .

[msharma]

Very strong reflection of emotions. The title is quiet apt to let the feel and the of frustration come out. Beautifully penning.

[Anushka joshi]

Thank you so much ma'am

[jacob erin-cilberto]

just the perfect paradox for the silent screams we often feel but that never emerge from our lips.
we bide, we put up with, we navigate through.
If we crate them up for too long...we do explode.
j.

[Anushka joshi]

Yes sir , Thank you for your kind words