After Death Knocks

inspired by a special man

 

 

 

Beyond brazen sun

Dwells violet moon

Dreams occur in crystal ball

As omniscience reveals sight

I taste your pain

Longing to escape reality,

You become preoccupation

Kissing lips soft and sincere,

For you I unfold

I will die with you

 Beside you

Arms surround you

We shall become dust together

Miles separate

Yet you're inside my mind

Could my touch heal wounds

Of inescapable destructive forces?

Submission of body and soul

Left without choice

Your desires are mine

We build a bridge to Transcendence

Feel the heartbeat of my spirit

Contour of bodies intertwine

Love conquers all

Through sickness and health

Loyalty abides

Wherever destiny finds us

Remember...

My Love for you is timeless

And more powerful...

Than death. 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Brette Medb]

The end of this poem was very powerful. Your words create a maze of thought and emotion and this poem is a unique quality. I can't say that I believe the words of this to be true for anyone but I believe that the hope that it is and the possibility is what is necessary to human life. Everyone wishes to be loved to such an extent when it is no longer conditional but unconditional and timeless. Though it happens rarely and perhaps never at all it is the hope and the wonder of that keeps our faith in love and life. Nice work.


Brette

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

oh i love those last three lines ... (i see that i am not the only one)

very beautiful piece of writing... simply wonderful

[pal]

"My Love for you is timeless
And more powerful...
Than death. "

A deep and very powerful expression of love. Lovely poem.

pal

[Legion]

Wonderfully done. Deep. Entrancing. Bravo!

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

A beautiful writing. Thank you so much for sharing. Debileah

[Lalli]

We shall become dust together...

Ok first that picture ay mami, yes please!

Second appolina writing about love?! And not seductive exotica, I need to regroup hahaha, no I'm just teasn.

Great poem, amazing one liners, and love the creativly written and I loved the crystal ball line too

Much love n respect

-Lalli

[Mr. Lopez]

And what a special man he must be . This is very beautiful and describes the kind of love that men would die for. Absolutely beautiful!!

Could my touch heal wounds

Of inescapable destructive forces?

The touch of true love can bring down even the largest of mountains of dispair. I loved this one.

Mr. Lopez

[Poetic Injustice]

Oh yeah. You rawk. =0)

[A LaDy NaMeD D]

I loved this it reminds me of my boyfriend especially this line:


"Miles separate

Yet you're inside my mind"

Because i am in a long distance relationship. And even though sometimes we feel the strain of being apart, we're still togther and we're trying our hardest to make it work. It made me think like this...True love, no matter what can survive. If i love you truely no matter what till death do us part, even in marriage, divorce, break ups whatever, i will always love you and nothing will change that. Loved it.

Danni J

[Reeses]

Brilliant. If onli my rhymeless poems could sound and feel so compelling and comforting and thrilling.

"We build a bridge to Transcendence

Feel the heartbeat of my spirit" I loved the entire flow. "heartbeat of my spirit" made me open my mind.