You live through me..

when i stare into the blank nothingness (even today)..
..all i see is you..

i see the light that used to be my sunshine..

i see the smile that used to spell my joy..

n the eyes in whose reflection i saw the goodness in me..

cause you were and still are my escape..

my hope n happiness..

and even if you are gone..

you are there in every hallow i stare at n will always be..

you may not be around but you will always live through me..


(dedicated to people we have loved and lost..)

Reviews

[Sweet & Tender Hooligan]

A interesting, thought provoking and beautiful poem. However it could be even more powerful if you sharpened up some of the wording. You use 'I' too much and 'and' or 'n' also words like joy, hope and happiness are not necessary and could be better expressed in a different way. Other than that you write beautifully.

[Jessica Alvarez]

excellent :) i love your writings :)

[Sherene]

excellent... i loved her but she didnt..
shoulda known it would mess wit ya brain, Yet, I did.
good poem ...

[the in between]

Extremely Heart wrenching... thanks for sharing it was amazing.

[Art]

a very captivating piece...

it is nice to know how we are or become part of the journey of those we touch within our own lives...

very nice work...

Great work , and specially a very very nice ending . Loved this .
Something comes to mind , do not know why , it is a line I heard in a movie (forgot the name) , which goes something like : If you really love some one then you should not be selfish and hold them back when they want to go ,because maybe their happiness is in that .

[Sydney Evans]

So beautiful

[Akshat♥]

i really like the poem..
the way you have written has special effect to it..
this poem is sad...came directly through your heart
and soul...
thankyou for sharing it:)

[Steve]

Very nice! I like this style. Its easy to read, and its easy to 'see' te emotion in it.

[windtalker1252]

'You may not be around but you will always live thrugh me"
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