Fluid in my Spine

Fluid in my Spine

A Poem by Arsenic Nemesis
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Sometimes, I just feel GREAT!

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Sometimes I get this feeling,

one that I cannot properly differentiate from others

it is at first a pop,

spark,

then fizzle!

The next thing I know I am woven,

fluid is in my spine and I just can’t stop!

Weave it to the left,

snaking back to the right;

such an exhilarating experience!

As high as a kite,

when a baby bird first takes flight

I dance under the influence of the sun,

and softly sway under the withered gaze of

the deep-rooted moon.

 

I must say, it reminds me oddly of the taste of wine,

this phenomenal fluid that is in my spine!

© 2010 Arsenic Nemesis


Author's Note

Arsenic Nemesis
What is this spell? Another poem!? This is outrageous! I cannot write a poem to save my twelfth dimesional life, and here I am with another!? Well, this is more than likely going to be another piece of garbage, but enjoy (if you can) mortals~

(And yes, this is how I felt yesterday, whilst dancing to the amazing cover of "99 balloons" by Goldfinger <3)

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Now I have the sudden urge to dance around in my room with 99 Red Balloons blasting on my MP3.

This is a MAGNIFICENT poem, perfectly explaining the wonderful feeling when you dance to a song you love. ;)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful! You did an outstanding job writing this (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


this poem gave me the hebegebies, in a good way, i had to touch my back and shake myself to get rid of the feeling, maybe it was the fluid in my spine, but i loved it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I hope you don't really believe you can't write a poem!! this is great! strong rhyme scheme, and strong sense of humour, very randomly reminded me of BFG haha don't know where that came from! the pops and fizzles I think haha nice!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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I love this! I love the happiness of it and your choice of words! Your poem brought a smile to my face! Great piece! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Haha this one was hilarious. Hope you'll write another one like it.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Another amazing poem. Your style of poetry makes me laugh and smile, and I really enjoy them. I rarely read that style of poetry, for I prefer dark and sad poetry but yours are very amusing. Keep it up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


You're like a more disturbed and not so childish version of Shel Silverstein lol

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very well done ! it seems you aliens do have wonderful sense of poetry :D


Posted 10 Years Ago


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Haha! That is an AMAZING poem, and I love it. It made me laugh, and I know how this feels. I LOVE the pop, spark, fizzle part, and I LOVE the ending; it's fantastical. I lovers it. Wonderful!! (:

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on December 12, 2010
Last Updated on December 13, 2010
Tags: dance, wine, spine, fluid, joyful, sun, moon, happy

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Arsenic Nemesis
Arsenic Nemesis

Redcar, United Kingdom



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