Why didn't you call.

Why didn't you call.

A Poem by Dirty-Hipster

I waited by the phone all night.

But you didn't call.

3:00am and I'm still waiting.

Why didn't you call?

 

I'm still waiting by the phone.

But you won't call.

3 days later.

Why didn't you call?

 

The days go by

But you never call

I look at the phone

Why didnt you call?

 

Years go by

But you never called

I look at the phone

and move on.

 

 

© 2011 Dirty-Hipster


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This is a very poignant poem..... you convey the frustraton, the patience, the unwillingness to give up on a friendship or love.....wonderful, unique way of portraying those emotions... you make the reader once again, feel your pain . Very nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why didn't you call?

11 Years Ago

Yeah! That's right!



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This is a very poignant poem..... you convey the frustraton, the patience, the unwillingness to give up on a friendship or love.....wonderful, unique way of portraying those emotions... you make the reader once again, feel your pain . Very nice work

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Why didn't you call?

11 Years Ago

Yeah! That's right!
Excuse me?






why didn't you call?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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