Smorzando

I close my eyes

and I fall into this void

where no one hears my cries

where sounds seem so devoid.

I cannot feel my heart anymore

the constant pounding has faded.

Am I still here? I lost track of yore

left abandoned and jaded.

Feel the touch of life as you die

let yourself shelter no remorse

the end is comming, it stands nigh

and soon everything will be even worse.

Author's Note

Please ignore bad grammar, if any.

Reviews

[~~Mere~d~i~t--h~~]

One of my favorites of yours. great work.
"Feel the touch of life as you die" Very powerful.

[Arabdha]

"left abandoned and jaded"..thats such a beautiful verse..!!

Like the poem , specially the ending ; which sound very apocalyptic .