Concrete decision

Concrete decision

A Poem by ArundassTP
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Decisions once taken in a moment becomes destiny for some people

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Concrete decision
However strong
strengthens it
erodes
as time passes
within yourself
in the last moment
realizing
it was a fault by default.
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© 2020 ArundassTP


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I think so many make decisions allowing only for the black and white of it.
Instead, there is so much gray area...maybe they are afraid to go there.
they just want "neat"---but life gets sloppy and out of order sometimes...just the way it is.
I enjoy your writing and how it lets me delve into it.
j.

Posted 1 Week Ago


I believe we decide our journey. Destiny can be changed by the movement of life. All things we do good or bad. We will pay for in the ending. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. You made the reader ponder and think. The goal of the writer.
Coyote

Posted 1 Week Ago


ArundassTP

1 Week Ago

thank you friend
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

I enjoyed your work and you are welcome.
I read your line -a fault by default, as someone unwilling to make a choice, so one is given you. Learning to decide on the fly is a skill worth developing.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ArundassTP

1 Week Ago

thank you friend.
"fault by default" is an extremely strong line and image cementing the idea of decision indeed being concrete in their nature. Strong expression of theme.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ArundassTP

1 Week Ago

thanks friend, for a good review on this poem.

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ArundassTP
ArundassTP

Tellicherry, Kerala, India



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