Feeling of wellbeing

Feeling of wellbeing

A Poem by ArundassTP
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If I felt illiterate, it is because of light, if I felt literate, it is because of darkness.

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Light from lantern; fears the darkness
Hundreds of facts; I felt illiterate
Observing around;
Transforming, as time passes;
I felt, I am illiterate a thousand times
Transformation is the key
Never miracle happened
Dipped inside darkness
I felt I am happier;
Feeling of wholeness and well-being.
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© 2020 ArundassTP


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Love the line "I am illiterate a thousand times". I wonder about the significance of the small letter i in the line "I felt i am happier" and the capitalization of Wholeness and Well-being. The feeling of illiteracy, words stolen making you dumb is very compelling.

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Really really like this... nice writing style.

Posted 6 Days Ago


ArundassTP

6 Days Ago

thank you friend.
Light and Ashes

6 Days Ago

You're welcome
Most of us feel alive in the dark places.
"Dipped inside darkness
I felt I am happier;
Feeling of wholeness and well-being."
I believe we need to taste dirt to appreciate the light. Powerful and good words shared. I did like this poem.
Coyote


Posted 1 Week Ago


ArundassTP

1 Week Ago

happy to see you reviewed my poem. thanks
Coyote Poetry

1 Week Ago

Was my pleasure and you are welcome.
thanks friend, i must edit it. thanks for review.

Posted 1 Week Ago


Love the line "I am illiterate a thousand times". I wonder about the significance of the small letter i in the line "I felt i am happier" and the capitalization of Wholeness and Well-being. The feeling of illiteracy, words stolen making you dumb is very compelling.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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ArundassTP
ArundassTP

Tellicherry, Kerala, India



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Creative, imaginative and expressive; i love to write poetry, short stories and Short essays. I am also a photographer, traveller and gardener and I do data work from Desktop; and also translates from.. more..

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