Even Rain Lilly can't sleep

Even rainlilly can't sleep

Seen heavenly bright light from the clouds
Roaring, Roaring and roaring
With anger, the clouds are in tears
Dropping on earth, helpless.

Sleeping souls raised their heads
Hearing shouts and screaming
Tears are floating over the earth
Souls are helpless, they climbed the air.

No! Never cry so hardly
Earth is soaked in tears
We are with you! Oh God!
Never cry too long.

Oh God! Never play with that sword
Fire pierce inside heart, burning
There blooms a rain lilly alone
Even it's sleepless tonight !

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Poet... a Memorial to the lonely who have given their heart and soul
for survival as the World becomes a Challenge to be passed on..The Gems that glitter in the Earth will appear and inspire others to explore a path of Positive endeavors. Amen... Pat

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Crowley]

This writing hangs heavy as do our hearts who cry for the earth and all the living beings of this earth. I love the second line repeat with roaring, it rally adds a layer of frustration and hopelessness. Great piece here. Loved it.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊 Have a nice day 😊

[schlanks]

I love the idea of the clouds being so lost in despair that they're helpless to stop flooding the earth below. Makes the whole thing feel like a vicious cycle. Emotional and thought provoking.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend and Have a nice day 😊

[Chris Shaw]

Earth is soaked in tears

Yes it is. The way our species conducts itself, it is surprising the sun ever comes out to play.

Sad piece Arundass.

Chris

[Arundass TP]

Thank you, and have a nice day friend 😊 I myself is crying looking all-around.

[Chris Shaw]

I think many of us feel the same friend 😢

[Arundass TP]

Sure.... I want to go to a remote place , I feel. Woods are becoming less and less now due to urbanization

[June bug]

There blooms a rain lilly alone
Love this line a lot, this is a heartfelt write

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend. Have a nice day

[living lavender]

a good cry can be cleansing to the soul.
sometimes it is welcomed. sometimes unexpected.
{enjoyed this read very much.}

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊 Have a nice day

[jacob erin-cilberto]

"a rain lily alone" love that line.
This poem really clobbered me over the head...all those tears shed from above...clouds? God?
Who's crying now...once someone allows him or herself to let out the emotions...a good cry emerges.
j.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊 Have a nice day 😊