The Dream World

Appears and Disappears

In the mid of scroching heat
Painting with colors of rainbow shades
Seeing colorful flowers all around
Experiencing fragrance of red roses.

Walking slowly in cool breeze
Thinking of canopies spreading all around
Taking a piece of yummy cake
Sitting alone and eating it

Unless the world of sorrow, creeps in!
knitting threads of sufferings
The colorful world blesses
Until the heat waves touches the soul.
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Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

A moment in time where you seem to be so peaceful by yourself, one can reflect on peacefulness, take in pleasant surroundings, have a bite to eat; but when the world is in turmoil, sorrow sets in....and we suffer, because "the heat wave touches the soul".....a good metaphor and a lovely write.
Warmly, B

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Betty Hermelee]

you're very welcome!!
Warmly, B

[Marie]

The current heatwave in the US is very finely penned and depicted in this poem, dear T.P. You have painted a beautiful picture of Summer for your reader. I love the cooling breeze, enjoying the beautiful flowers, their scent and colour. Sitting quietly having some cake and just enjoying the view and watching people going by. So dreamy, but then the intense heat visits, so hot it would melt one's soul and one has to go indoors to try to keep cool. A wonderful allegorical gem! So enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Marie]

Always most welcome, T. P...

[hdc]

you painted a colorful picture with words.

Well done sir.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend

[Poetic_Vixen]

How a pleasant start with the merry flowery dream with their lovely fragrance then the reality hitting in the last stanzas of the scorching weather. Impressive read!

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[In Em's Wonderland]

Can't have feelings without color!
The first stanza made me picture a desert for some reason or another, but I enjoyed the simplicity and descriptions involved.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow great write, its one who is with spirit yes everything is beautiful but second is life but last is the answer of what we have inside. Thank you for sharing your work, good read.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Thomas W Case]

Tremendous imagery. Powerful work.

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend

[Simbles]

eloquent. look forward to what your future works hold for us all :)

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Papaya]

Some lovely metaphors. Enjoyed.

[Arundass TP]

Thank you friend 😊

[Stu. T.H.]

Though the blessing of peace is momentary, its beauty lives in the eternal memories we hold. Thank you for sharing your work, author Arundass TP, nice imagery.

[Arundass TP]

Thànk you friend