The soul of wayfarer

One of my oldest poems. Rewritten 09/2016

The soul of wayfarer

 

 He has a restless mind
 who needs the world

 

Heart looking for luck,
 soul longs for peace

 

The legs will take away,
 burden is light to carry
 when the mind speed up

the journey

 

He finds joy for traveling,
 finding new adventures

 

I do not think him can be
 shackle in one place

       

heart

 

soul

 

of his

 

by then will fade away slowly

Author's Note

Rewritten.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Some people and things cannot be held down.
"I do not think him can be
shackle in one place"
The wayfarer is seeking new place to see. Rarely stop to attract attention or love. Thank you Sarah for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Chris]

I didn't taste English as a second language. But it felt more as if words were left out - seemingly on purpose, though the mind put its own thought in their place.

[whispereversolightly]

I can feel your feelings in this

[~Sarah~ Idríel T..]

Thank you all for your comments on my poem. :)

[Jvl narasimharao]

a GREAT BEGINNING. There is a lot meaning in the write.
yours JVL

[deeps]

Wow this is really amazing!
I like your style. Very nicely done.