Dark rainbow

Dark rainbow

A Poem by Ashentara
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a little mind spilling

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I’m black.  My soul is black and evil.

I’m red. My heart is all passion and love

I’m purple.  Enigmatic and mysterious

I’m dark blue.  The stuff of your nightmares.

 

But above all…

 

I’m a dark rainbow.  You should be very afraid

© 2008 Ashentara


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This is a simple piece, on the surface, if you look past that you will see that it is actually quite complex and a bit mysterious as I hope was your intention. Of course is it also very dark and sort of creepy, and in all those aspects it's a very good piece.

Richard.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm.... I should be, but I am not. Why be afraid of another's darker nature, when I have my own to fear? Yours can harm the body, mine can harm my mind. :P Just a little argument lol. Great poem though, definitely has made me think and reflect a little.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 11, 2008

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Ashentara
Ashentara

Brest, France



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Bio... hmmm.... what can I say. I'm 30 going on 31, I'm French, I translate video games for a living, but my dream would be to become a real writer. Working on it! I have a daughter whose name is Gab.. more..

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