Ideal death

Ideal death

A Poem by Ashentara

many references to my favourite band.


“Maybe I’m just the thing

To break my own fall”



I want to die like this

Take a few pills

Knock back a few beers

While listening to *my* sacred music

Quietly fading away

In bliss… contented

Happy to forget everything

Happy to forgive everybody

Nothing matters anymore

Just ready to let go

Forget everything

Become immersed in the moment

And just close my eyes to everything

Peace and passion raging fury in my “black-tangled heart”.

© 2009 Ashentara

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good work.........powerful poem!

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Added on October 17, 2009



Brest, France

Bio... hmmm.... what can I say. I'm 30 going on 31, I'm French, I translate video games for a living, but my dream would be to become a real writer. Working on it! I have a daughter whose name is Gab.. more..

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