Pan

No, not Peter Pan. =)

Gazing electricity

Through the darkened,

Humid room

While questions stutter

From her lips

And laughter rolls

Off of him in waves.

Not processing the what

Or the why,

Just the who.

All that counts,

Is they are kindred

Soul-searchers.

Author's Note

I feel like my writing is just getting more and more abstract. Either way, enjoy.

Reviews

[Luximir]

Wow awesome! I love the quickness of the piece and the great questions that answer more and more as one reads on. Great poem!

[C. Rose]

Pan made me think greek mythology, but I don't see anything satyr related other than laughter. Perhaps I'm missing something. What is the connection to Pan - and which Pan?

I liked stutters, rolls, waves and "not processing the..."

[Mayank]

that was beautiful abstract piece, abstract is trippy man...

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The connection here was magnetic. I didnt think I could separate them if I tried.
For some reason, I imagined even the walls sweating. intense.

[Ruth]

I find this is connected and lovely...when two kindred souls are together, any seeking outside of that is manageable in the name of love, beautiful x

[realmwriter]

I feel like there is a flourishing beauty between to people and a strong love that will not be denied. I love it.

[Avinash]

There is an amount of mysticism with this work. Like being on clouds and rolling in a dream land. Loved the musical quality of this work. It has got all rhythm and hues.

[Zakari Schmidt]

Sometimes when faced with such a soul, one can't help but stutter and stumble over the language of life and love..knowing the size of those moments are only magnified. You make abstract look easy and that leaves quite the impression upon your readers. I really enjoyed your poem :)

[Delmar Cooper]

Not what you say, not even the way you say it. Not necessarily what you fell, but the way you feel it? It's all about that in spades and capital letters.

[hardeep sabharwal]

I like the abstractness of this piece, written so nicely,
I enjoyed reading this piece
Thankyou for sharing