A cute Girl

THis is about When I first saw my First Love... What I had felt... Love you..

One day , In my class
I saw a cute Girl
She was so Charming
and Shining Like a Pearl

She was new
and known by few
She had Smile on her face
With a Blushing Blue Dress

Something I Felt
This type of situation

I Never had Dealt

I went to her

And whispered in her ear

"An Apple a Day

 Keeps Doctor Away,

 You Stay Blessed

 I Wish and I Pray"

 I think...

 It's not my Word

 But my Heart wants to say:

 You are the reason

 Why I start my Day!

Reviews

[Anindita Janhabee]

The more I read, I understood better...
Last night someone told me "life is too short to over think"
And see, I assure you, there are lots of happiness waiting for you.....
And with time, you're moving towards those.....
I never said against her... nor will I. Because I know she is special to you.. and your special being is my special being too...
but one thing I say is that coin has both sides....
you are seeing only one...
the next side is unseen...
Aau Kichi kahibini....
bas etiki, bcz I can't make u understand, hope u get what u deserve... hope u get ur happiness soon...

[Stan Lee]

Bet that cute girl would have liked this poem! Nice job Ashish! :)

[Ashish]

Well! Honestly I don't know :)

[AquaWater5674]

Cute message smiley

[matrixmark]

Really cute - I remember these days at school. The approach towards the girl, the worry of it all, the innocence of it all. Brings back memories this cute piece - loved the blue blushing dress bit.

Mark.

[Ashish]

Thanks mark :)
I am happy that u enjoyed

[matrixmark]

Welcome, brough back some old memories.

Mark.

[Anindita Janhabee]

Oh... this is so cute and sweet...
i love it...
Love isn't simple... But simplicity is the best way to hold love....
Love at first sight!! isn't it ?
Will be glad to read more from you...
Proud to see such amazing Indian writers here........!!!
Stay blessed....

[Ashish]

Thank you dear, I am glad that you like it and your review has encouraged me a lot..
And yes ! Love at first sight is amazing and do happen to peoples.. :)

[Anindita Janhabee]

so... are you both together now...?
and where are you from ?

[Ashish]

You had mentioned that Love was not easy...
In fact we were never been together ..but I still love her :)

I am from steel city Rourkela

[Anindita Janhabee]

Omg rourkela ?
tume odia toh ?

[Ashish]

Yes .. Mu odia

[Leica Fox]

Sweet. I like it :) --- I'm confused by the seemingly random capitalization of some words (but really, thats a style-thing, I suppose) and I think "Smile in her face" should be "smile on her face" --- still, its cute, I like it. Oh and blushing blue dress confuses me a little too, but thats probably just me. When I think of blushing, I think of the color red, rather than blue.

[Ashish]

Thanks ...for reviewing
It will help me a lot.. :)

And yes .there is no need of blushing
I use that just to support the word "blue"

[horizon]

It is really a sweet little poem with thouhhtful clo sing lines

[Ashish]

Thanks.. :)

[ChristinaHuntere]

Aw :) that's really sweet :D :D :D

[Ashish]

Thank u :)

[Ayushi Sharma]

wow yr........u had proposed ur first love with wonderful words...nice lines dude!!!

[Ashish]

No ..dear ..I wish I could ..but I can't express these words to her..
But yes these are my heart's word..

And m happy that u liked it.. :)

[Ayushi Sharma]

ookkkk.. koi bAat nhi