Everytime

Everytime you say my name

my world starts to shake

and my head starts to spin

I feel your love again

 

Everytime you touch my arm

My world falls apart

and a chill runs through my veins

I feel that desire again

 

Everytime you kiss my lips

my world begins again

and my heart starts to race

I feel the passion again

 

Everytime I see your face

my world is  lit up with your love

and my breathing starts to stop

I feel that need again

 

To reach out

and kiss you

Press against you

and holod you tight

Never miss a single beat

and feel our love flow again

Reviews

[PaperHearts]

Aww! So cute! This captured the infatuation and admiration in a relationship perfectly, in a way that seemed both universal and personal at the same time. There was a really intense sense of intimacy in this piece that I liked, as the emotions evoked were ones that I could really relate to. The repetition of the word 'again' was really effective, and I liked the fact that you continued that concept all the way through your poem. Nice work,
~PaperHearts

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Great well written love poem!

[melissa]

loved this:)

[A Girl in Love]

I love this poem, well written! I know the feeling! I love it!