Destruction Of Our Connection.

Destruction Of Our Connection.

A Poem by Karina Anderson
































Numbing grip of mistrust takes hold.

Jealous waves rage for control.

Lost is the shared love once in the air.

Obstacles we can’t get over cause tear.

 

Roughage to my heart- unsettling.

Trying to make peace; but can’t let go.

When your love hurts you, it’s permanent.

Impossible it seems, to try and forget.

 

Left are the harsh words you said;

Wouldn’t it be better, if we both cared?

Crumbling edges of our connection, lost.

Destructive actions; we must pay the cost.

 

Resurrected is the uncertainty I had.

In you, I have abandoned all hope of future.

It was your choice; unfortunate for you.

It should have never existed, I was choice two.

 

Our wreckage now lies in an unburied grave.

Somewhere no one can see, or even find.

These two destinies- not meant to be.

Crossed in a moment but needed to be freed.

 

Connective love that will never really fade.

Even though the betrayal left it stained.

Washed away is out forgotten potential.

Sleep now; forget all of the trouble.

© 2011 Karina Anderson


Author's Note

Karina Anderson
Kind of really personal, so yeah.

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So sad and heartbreaking, but powerful. This deserves a 100!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I actually really like that idea lines, Raymond. Thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Very nice Karina, nice (however sad) imagery. from a critique standpoint...how would you feel about unmarked grave instead of unburied?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, it was so beautiful and touched my heart as I read. I just adored the imagery and how you wove together the poem itself to create it as you did.

Posted 13 Years Ago


A host of imagery, sadness and prayer. We as a race strife for secrecy and beneficent but never reach it, your words tackle some of the most intricateness workings of the human mind, well done, a great read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

stunning honesty and beautiful imagery! love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on April 21, 2011
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Tags: love, connection, betrayal, destruction, over, moving on, hurt, forgiving

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Karina Anderson
Karina Anderson

Waterloo, NY



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My name is Karina Anderson, and I am a young writer. A person in the making. Someone attempting to further her talents and perfect her craft. I may not always post the best material, I may not be so k.. more..

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