Is this Love or Just Confusion

Is this Love or Just Confusion

A Poem by Hippy
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This is a song im done with it but wanna change a few peices and add one more verse

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Now I take my walk

Down to the beach

Singing sweet, sweet melodies

And the next baby

To walk by me

Gives me a holla

Making my insides scream

And I say

Baby, how’d you like

To go for a spin

Then we take our walk

Make some sweet love talk

And that’s when she caught me

Like a fish on a hook

Leaving me asking

 

Is this love Or just confusion

Is this love Will I ever find out

Is this love or just confusion

Baby don’t be messing me round

 

Now I been following you

Since you walked up to me

In the way you move

Really makes me groove

So don’t stop

You look so hot

Oh baby

You really make my heart sing

Just don’t be messing me round

 

Is this love or just confusion

Is this love or do you be misusing

Is this love or just confusion

Baby don’t be messing me round

 

Now baby I’m tired

Of you using me

Anyway you please

In I’m tired you abusing me

Beaten this heart around

Cus baby

This heart is born to sing

This heart is born to sing

This heart

Is born

To sing

So baby

Don’t be messing me round

© 2010 Hippy


Author's Note

Hippy
yeah i didnt realize that this was also the name of one of hendrix's songs but im working on changing it up some i wouldnt want to steal from that god of a guitarist i just thought of the line and then started writing
pls send opinions and idea to better it

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i really like this! Great job on this, Hippy!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aww this is cute. Good job. :P

Posted 14 Years Ago


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My names austin lee wallace i am a hippy and thats what they all call me. i love music its the greatest, i play guitar the harp piano flute violin and whatever i can get me hands on. Im not much of a .. more..

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