My heart will never renew

Something Old,

Something New.

My heart will

never renew.

Something borrowed,

Something blue.

My heart will

never renew.

Our time was special,

our time was sweet.

When we were together,

nothing had us beat.

The stories of adventure,

the stories of destiny

all seem to be true,

our hearts manifested with dreams.

Late night conversation,

early morning cuddles.

Nothing as elegant as your

warmth right next to me.

Forever and always,

you are my heartbeat.

Just wish you were sitting

here next to me.

I miss you my love,

I miss you my sweet.

It kills me everyday

that you are gone.

I wish I had more time,

so I could give you that ring.

I wish I had more time,

so I could make you forever mine.

It pains me to see you gone,

it hurts me to believe you are not.

I wait for you to walk through the door

so I can say hello and welcome home.

Like the saying goes,

'We started with a simple hello

but ended with a complicated goodbye.'

Thank you for making it

hard to say goodbye.

Something Old,

Something New.

My heart will

never renew.

Something borrowed,

Something blue.

My heart will

never renew.

I'll love you forever and

I can not wait to see you again.

Here's to my sweet,

forever in my heart.

Author's Note

Thank you for reading this poem! This was another one of those "spur of the moment" works. Tell me what I can do to improve this piece. Any and all feedback is appreciated!!

Reviews

[lostnstars]

I admire how you describe the love that you felt and it seems like you're not going to get over with this person but lastly, I love how you're optimistic at the last stanzas of your writing, "i cannot wait to see you again" it seems that you're still hopeful and that what makes me happy because most of the writings just end with, I miss you and goodbye's. But you still have head held high and hoping. I hope the narrator or this person on your poems meets her/him again. I'm looking forward to read some of your works!! Please keep on writing, you're amazing!! -lostnstars

[Jordan Smith]

Thank you lostnstarts! I am glad that you enjoyed this poem! I wouldn't say that i'm amazing, but I appreciate the compliment. I just try to tell stories the best way I can.

[Shy_muse]

This is an amazing poem. I loved the progression and could feel the pain of saying "goodbye" to a loved one. I think it would be more impactful if you ended with
"Something Old,
Something New.
My heart will
never renew.

Something borrowed,
Something blue.
My heart will
never renew."

[Jordan Smith]

I appreciate the review! I actually thought about it when I was writing the poem.

[Shy_muse]

You're welcome! I just thought it would have more continuity that way! :) Keep writing!

[Amy R]

WOW!
this made me tear up so much! 😢
Reminded me of my ex, that i still can't seem to forget or unlove if possible,
wish it didn't end without an explanation.
it hurts all now even though i'm trying to be strong.
Such an emotional write!
I love it,.... Thank you for sharing Jordan..
-Amy

[Jordan Smith]

I'm sorry to hear about that happening to you Amy :(

[Amy R]

It's okay, It happened for a reason,
I'll keep posted with your writes :)

[Jordan Smith]

At least you are happy now right? & awesome! I appreciate that :)

[Amy R]

I'm happy but not fully like before,
ur welcome🌹

[Jordan Smith]

I hope you get to that point of being fully happy like you were before. That's what we all strive for is true and full happiness.

[Amy R]

Yes I will get there in time :)

[Jordan Smith]

:) I'm glad to be able to bring something that you like in this poetry

[The Iron Horseman]

Very heartfelt and emotional, Jordan.
I would, however, make the decision as to whether you want it to rhyme or to be blank verse, as it presently oscillates between the two. I found that a little jarring.

[Mrudula Rani]

Hi Jordan, I would probably put the refrain in couplets form. However you present your thoughts, it is a lovely poem that has gentle flow and speaks of heart ache and regrets, for losing a lover.

[¿]

Is there someone you miss patently Sir?😮...I see you writing deep bout blue and pain....but fervent writes of course!
On this poem, yess...that is why I guess we shall use our hearts wisely...no renewal and no guarantee alongside...
But tis helpless when love's pronounced...
...enjoyed? Noah! Felt it!! :)

[Jordan Smith]

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem! I'm just glad that i'm writing somewhat consistently these past couple of months.

[¿]

Your excellency!!🙇

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

This made me cry, well almost. There was someone here who I loved and wanted to marry but he broke my heart after the initial hellos and now there will be nothing borrowed, nothing blue.

[Jordan Smith]

I'm sorry to hear that you went through that. It's never easy. I hope that this poem didn't bring back negative thoughts about your experience.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

In a way it did bring back the realization that its over. He blundered some. I bungled some. And now the chances are gone. He was a special kind of man. But leave it be. Whats gone is gone. Thank you for the poem and for hearing me.

[Jordan Smith]

Of course! There's also always a place to talk here about all that occurred if you need to just vent.

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you so much...I'll remember that!

[Jordan Smith]

Of course :) anything for a friend

[Dhara_Ditzy Kat]

Thank you for considering me a friend :)

[Jordan Smith]

:) anytime