Broken key

Live Strong and Proud

LIVE STRONG

     ...

The key to her heart was

all the pain and tears,

never could it be restored,

not by anyone,

many came close,

but gave up,

searching the scattered pieces,

she once was a beautiful

confident, free woman,

but not anymore,

not giving others a second glance,

not caring about who she was,

now she lives,

regretting all the things,

wishing she would go away,

to a place where she will meet him again,

she was invisible,

to her old friends,

she was known as the,

heart broken woman,

now she is an old,

sad, quiet woman,

wishing she could go back in time,

and let them finish the pieces

     ...

LIVE WITH PRIDE

 

Author's Note

Never be sad, enjoy what you have. Be free, confidence, and proud of who you are. Don't let others bring you down, you have to be stronger than that. Give everyone a chance, live your life (just don't break the law). Make sure you are careful so you won't regret anything. Don't let the key ever be broken. If they really want you, they will comeback. Live STRONG AND PROUD.

Reviews

[Aeruuli]

This was a beautiful little piece. I really like the imagery and the emotions you have captured within it. It is true that sometimes sadness can make you blind to other options that are around you until it is too late, but I like how you gave hope in your author's note afterwards as well.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thanks, yeah sometimes sadness won't let us see the thing around us.

[Confuser]

y/w.................................................D

[Dara]

Your poem is so beautiful and you show wisdom beyond your years. I heard your message loud and clear :-) Great job!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you a lot.

[misha]

This was a sad piece about regret. Great write!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Quinn]

Beautiful. Seriously amazing.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you :)

[MAD ENGLISHMAN]

This is a lovely poem. You have made a few little spelling mistakes but that's ok.
I like this .

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thanks, I will try to find them and correct it

[Deaidre Newby]

Beautiful. My favorite line - "searching the scatter pieces".

[Bhumika Devkota]

It is also one of my favorite line

[Norah]

Beautiful piece of poetry. Excellent job!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thanks hope you enjoyed it

[Matching Socks]

Another really great write from you.
I am just amazed again by your ability to capture such emotion and yet you are only 12?
Really? Amazing... Just amazing,

[Bhumika Devkota]

thank you again

[Blake Fodor]

I really enjoyed your imagery. Love the poetic pull of your words. Excellent piece.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you so much