Deep breath

Deep breath

and let go,

don’t let the shadow

of your past

destroy your soul,

It won’t be easy

but just look forward,

It hurts

when the memories just

come clashing backwards,
Deep breath

and let go.

Reviews

[Briana O'Connor]

Simple, elegant, fast paced read you have penned. The message is clear and gracefully written. Thank you for sharing.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you for the review.

[Elsie]

I love the message it give to people. That is a a lesson I have helped many learn. Yet u put it in such simple terms that it great and will help many.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you Elsie.

[remarks]

I like the message this gives. Maybe I'm the only one who thought this but it reminds me of someone who is angry at something and has to keep reminding himself that it's not worth it- to let it go.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[R Smith]

push onwards, its hard to shake off the past sometimes but the message is clear, keep on keeping on, excellent writing :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you Richard,

[Arrinae]

So very often we allow things from the past haunt us, be they bittersweet, frightening, or heartbreaking memories. They stay with us, but they serve as a reminder and a lesson for us to learn from and grow stronger from.

We forget sometimes to leave the past where it belongs, and it can be one of the hardest things to accomplish.

[Bhumika Devkota]

One hundred percent agree with what you said. Thank you.

[Luna Zerimar]

...Wow.

I needed this. Opened my eyes a little.

With all the struggles I'm facing, you just cheered me on to keep going.

Thank you, friend. x

[Bhumika Devkota]

I am glad the poem helped.