Immortal

To be broken,

but still smile.

To suffer

and accept the pain,

If you cry,

but keep on laughing.

To get hurt again,

but keep on going.

To feel as if you are dying,

but you keep on living.

When someone stabs you in the back,

but you keep on trusting.

When someone tries to take away hope,

but you keep on believing;

Than you are stronger than

you see your self to be.

You are wiser than you believe.

If you are this than, 

my friend,

you are immortal.

Reviews

[anne]

this is such a wise poem..so true thoughts, inspirational and yeah to be such is difficult but one who is even close is stronger enough..wonderful read...:)))

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you,

[Pushkar Prabhat]

true words of wisdom..........
getting up every time is important.......
beautifully expressed......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you,

[R Smith]

There will always be those ready to put us down, keep getting up and keep on keeping on, wise words my friend :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Allima]

This poem is awesome! It's really inspirational. I love how it flows and the meaning behind the poem! You're an extraordinary poet .... and you should know it.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thanks and so are you.