Lost of Hope

Hope is the single feeling

that tells you to move on,

that motivates you,

that inspires you.

Lost of hope can

kill you,

make you so desperate,

make you do things you will regret.

However,

though it feels like you lost hope,

aren’t you still hoping

for something better?

Hope can’t be lost,

but you can lose it

Reviews

[Ashira Macy]

What I get from this is that hope can't be lost, but you can be. Maybe I am wrong, but either way I enjoyed it.

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you!

[Dalton Wagoner]

This is right on! I have been through two brain surgeries, and if there's one thing that I know a plethora about, it is hope! This is a very good poem. I once read a quote, it said, "poetry is the truth in its Sunday clothes." And you have really struck the nail on the head! Keep it up!

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[Dalton Wagoner]

Just do me a favor and keep on rocking! ;-)

[anne]

Hope is the single feeling
that tells you to move on,
that motivates you,
that inspires you.

Lost of hope can
kill you,
make you so desperate,
make you do things you will regret.

However,
though it feels like you lost hope,
aren’t you still hoping
for something better?

Hope can’t be lost,
but you can lose it..
I loved each line... wisdom imparted in beautiful lines...

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.

[R Smith]

losing hope is probably the worst feeling we can experience, of course its never really lost, more like lost sight of and as they say hope springs eternal, we can always see that silver lining it just sometimes sits out of reach, excellent poem and thought provoking :)

[Bhumika Devkota]

Thank you.