A Warm Embrace

Flowers of scared love

 

 

Nymphaea hollandia in pink or in white

A flower that’s radiant in accented light

Water lilies are beautiful, but a simpler name

I love giving them, to those of the same

Rainbow flowers signifies the rain

Colorful adaptations, lifting the pain

The lotus flower is scares in deed

Your life is a blessing, from this tiny little seed

Love has many ways, to share with you

The freshness of morning, Like after the dew

Picking these flowers with the sun in my face

I give them to you, with a warm embrace

 

Reviews

[Jessica Fox]

What a pretty poem!

[Wildfleour]

So sweeet....

[vanishing]

This is beautifully written

Shows great accentuation for the written word

I agree with the comments below, very passionate and colorful

one can feel the heart in every word, its a vision embracing the idea of loveliness


Excellent, thanks!

[Annalisa]

This is very sweet, and I absolutely love how each flower represents something different, a different emotion or purpose or..... i dunno.... This was great.

I saw one typo, "I love given them" doesn't make sense.... maybe "I love giving them"?

There is great skill and art in giving emphasis of an affectionate message with each flower. There is great form and good rhythm in this poem.

The words paint a picture well, early morning dews on colorful flowers. The choice of words is perfect.

This is a great piece.