The falling paradise

Perhaps.....Robert frost would be proud of me for this one :)

Intoxicated by the joys of earning

The troubled world lags alleviation

every moment the heaven is restored

The treasures replaced, the flowers in bloom

None of them could bear a truth.

It is bewildered in thirst and hunger

Growing more undomesticated

wrapped up in the so called fundamentalism

A bitter-slow transformation.

All the fragrances and paintings

Will they be secluded forever?

who shall then coherently embrace

The beauty and the primitive truth.

From life to life, verses stave

Unheard paths  of love discovered

Like an impossible map, to the lost paradise.

The anguish, the dying self- defiance

those future descendents,

Blind from the joy of giving

the burst of unsustainable fire and ice.

Author's Note

Would like to know about the title and the flow of the poem :)

Reviews

[Robert James Parfett]

If I understood correctly by "The Falling Paradise" you refer to the natural world and the true essence of living that we all fail to appreciate as we are carried along by our daily routine. I might be completely wrong, but that is what I got from it. Enjoyed it very much and think it flows well.

[patricia]

This was a piece of magic. It worked so well. Great depth, voice and a host of possibilities for the mind to ponder. Excellent work.

[Dayran]

An inquiry and warning that may be timely. Just ask those returning from the explosions of fire and ice.

[Blue Ivory]

Aaah, so a fan of Frost, are we? I'm curious to know what paradise you are referring to.

[Manpreet]

I liked the flow and the expression especially lines
From life to life, verses stave
Unheard paths of love discovered
Like an impossible map, to the lost paradise.
The title is in the last line. Well penned piece!

[quinfinn]

like Frost, you have taken the path less traveled. another very good and engaging piece of writing.

[Devanshu Rajput]

great poem with excellent choice of words

[Salar Majak]

wow
Blind from the joy of giving
the burst of unsustainable fire and ice.

i really love this expression, makes wonder truly
the title drew me to the poem and it flows nicely!
well done!

[Alexa Tasch]

I think the title is fine! The flow is fine too for the most part, except in some patches, but it doesn't detract from the poem at all! I thin Robert Frost would definitely like it. I know I did!