When We Are Together

You give me the smile on my face The feeling of butterflies when I see you We mesh together so welll that people stare People wonder why I picked you Can't they see you are much more than what they see and hear? People talk People laugh Then they think What do I see in you that makes me want you? You are sweet You are nice You are a whole other person when I'm with you I can't stop thinking about you About the next time we will see I may be just another girl in the same world Trying to find love and someone to love back I think of myself as a hopeless person Thinking too much And wondering I don't know how this road will take us But hopefully successful Hopefully people will realize to just shut their big mouths And leave us be To let us have our moments together Instead of the world watching You give me the happiness I feel everyday Knowing your there for me Thank you my love :) <3

Author's Note

My lines are mushed together for some reason. It looks right when I'm typing it but when I save it it looks like this. Just bear with it. :)

Reviews

[Lovecraft]

I have the same problem sometimes when I type s**t in, it's annoying as hell.

Ah, you seem to be a true romantic. This is beautifully crafted despite the hideous format you were forced into. ;)

Meaningful love and the other themes you use evoke the correct sensations and feelings. Like you can fall into another persons arms and the world around seems to melt away into sweet oblivion.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Yes. And thank you so much. :)

[ROBIN-RAMBLES-ON]

I love your words spiritually cool with an edge thanks

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you :)

[ROBIN-RAMBLES-ON]

Have a nice day

[Lord of mad men]

This is well penned and I really enjoyed the read. I think you may not not picked him fully maybe he picked you and that you did not pick but it just happen. I know how you feel. Many people did not respect my choice in a partner. So I know when people talk. My favorite line Is "people will realize they need to shut their mouths" I really liked this read you did a good job. Yours truely a mad lord

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you for the nice review. It did just happen. He picked me and I was unsure if I wanted him but it went well.

[Lord of mad men]

Your welcome it was my pleasure.

[matrixmark]

This is really good. People are so quick to judge a person by the way they look. The beauty inside a person and how they show it to the other person is so much more than beauty being skin deep. A lot of people are shallow, foolish and naive but this poem shows that once you look further than the looks their is far more to a person to what the eye beholds.

Written from the heart...excellent piece of work.

Mark.

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you so very much for the kind review :)

[Inject Positivity]

This is a heartfelt write... People are used to judge others by their own visionless eyes and they will never see what we see in our loved ones, they only know how to pass their comments... Love doesn't care what others think, it grows and moves on in its own beautiful world...

Sincerely
Dhiman

[Lauren_The_Awesome]

Thank you for the kind words :)