Drug Addiction

Had a poem like this, but decided to revise it, while I attempt to clear my head.

Sensations overwhelming,

Addicted to this drug of my soul

High on inspiration,

Flying through the clouds.

 

Losing control,

Possessed, and I am loyal

A slave to her callings

And bound by freedom.

 

A battleground of reality,

Unstable in the real world

Something worth being used

A passion ruled legally done.

 

Agonizing ecstasy,

I surrender to her pleasure

Of sweet serenity

A goddess of my wild imagination.

Author's Note

So we're clear - though there is a picture of weed, this is about writing and art.

Reviews

[Captain Blackheart (The..]

I great poem, shown how people percieve the sweetness of the drug they so crave. A wonderful write, powerful stuff!

[Glee]

Nice write. It makes one wonder truly what addiction the author is referring to.

[THERISA]

Interesting poem, Rayne. One feels that you're describing the influence of Marilyn upon you and your writing. Shaping your view of life and the world around you. Thank you for sharing this poem with us.

Therisa

[Phil Sanders]

Beautifully written .....

[Jane Doe]

Oh, I can so relate to this poem. It is fantastic.

"Agonizing ecstasy,

I surrender to her pleasure

Of sweet serenity

A goddess of my wild imagination."

This stanza is amazing, I just love it. It is the perfect way to end this poem, I espcially liked that you wrote 'Agonizing ecstacy' that is the perfect way to describe it. Great job! Thanks for sharing.