Filthy Games

Filthy Games

A Poem by Alicia Hirshey
















Desert the longing
Rid yourself the foes
Take back the magic
That inside of you flows
Stand up for nothing
But everything alike
Refuse to back down
Without putting up a fight
~*~
I refuse to be play
Your games of pretend
Instead I will hide myself
Inside the thoughts
I keep in my head
I will bleed my heart
With pen and ink
But who would care
Nobody will think a thing
~*~
I've done wrong
That I will admit
But nothing to hurt you
As much as this
I hope you rot
I will see you in hell
Enjoy your life
Sneaking to kill
~*~
Marked a liar
For words I helped you spill
Funny how you excepted
Only to steal my help
Mark my words
I won't be her last
Play it safe
Her reign of terror
Won't pass
~*~
You maybe be happy
But it's all a game
You will fall
From your rise to fame
I'll watch as you crumble
And your world fades away
Be The Voice
I helped build
An evil empire
That will help you kill
Claim to help
Save a life
Where will you be
When I take mine?
~*~
Suicidal tendencies
I tend to admit
I play the game easily
With pills in my fist
What would it matter
If you stole them all
You have taken everything
So why not have my soul?
~*~
Desert the longing
Rid yourself the foes
Take back the magic
That inside of you flows
Stand up for nothing
But everything alike
Refuse to back down
Without putting up a fight

© 2011 Alicia Hirshey


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Alicia Hirshey
ANGER

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Anger is definitely the right word to press upon this. I truly found this poem filled with pure acid and hate.
"I will bleed my heart
With pen and ink"
An amazing metaphor and description. Powerful write! :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I love this. So much. Into my favorites.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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OT
a very passionate write - the anger is powerful here for sure - "You maybe be happy
But it's all a game
You will fall
From your rise to fame
I'll watch as you crumble
And your world fades away" - strong words for a strong poem too - the words burn - quick and harsh - nice!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Wow, i love the anger. Damn, this is your most pissed poem. Every letter burns, every line throws a punch, and every stanza spits acid. Impressive.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great expression of that anger.. That's what's great about what we do.. we don't have to hold our emotions in and let them fester.....we pen them...x

Posted 13 Years Ago


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TJ
Anger is damn right! But you constructed it amazingly so this is no typical rant but a beautifully worded release

Posted 13 Years Ago


whoa...that anger...beautifully done!
Marked a liar
For words I helped you spill
Funny how you excepted
Only to steal my help
Mark my words
I won't be her last
Play it safe
Her reign of terror
Won't pass

this one is my favourite stanza...
a great piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow, there is so much animosity here. I love it. There is so many lines here that I loved. Here is a few. "You will fall
From your rise to fame
I'll watch as you crumble
And your world fades away
Be The Voice
I helped build
An evil empire" and "I play the game easily
With pills in my fist" Nicely done Ali.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The anger is very clear in this, almost terrifying. Still, it was an amazing write.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Alicia Hirshey

Hartford City, IN



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