Dreamers Trance

Written For Joshua Deathdealers Word prompt one

Tangled onset
Fancy at best
Start a riot
Leave the rest
Live your life
Shining bright in the sky
Hold on tight
It's one crazy ride
~*~
Form an idea
Mangle the rest
Don't stop know
This is dreaming
At it's best
Keep holding on
There is always something more
~*~
Sugar plum, blossoms
Trace the corners of your mind
It's easily forgotten
If you think
You don't have time
Rainbows and unicorns
Rain on my parade
Take it all
And mesh it
If only for today
~*~
Dreamers Trance
It's all in the gaze
Look at things
Up close or far away
We are who we are
Fighting this tangled mess
In our brain
Don't Hold it in
Let them know
We've got something to say.
~*~
Tangled onset
Fancy at best
Start a riot
Leave the rest
Live your life
Shining bright in the sky
Hold on tight
It's one crazy ride

Author's Note

Written for a word prompt that was given in the group woven dreamers. The words were picked by none other that Joshua. They were Fancy, Idea, Trance, Rainbow, and Blossom. If you have written one be sure to add it to the group page and who's ever is the best will be featured in the group.

Reviews

[Magic plus the mayhem.]

Love it!!! :DDD

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Beautiful and peaceful - like a nice vacation!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This would make a great song.
Its so full of energy and life.

[∂αʌ<..]

a great write, i was transported in the trance that you set into this poem!
^^

[alerodri]

to the point, yet inspiring direct yet u can interpret it in so may ways it is so personal it becomes relatable

[Lily Mae]

Nice job with this..you did it well..xx

[joshua deathdealer]

This is so awesome!! The way that you weaved the prompted words. I'm impressed and the entire write is absolutely gorgeous. Well done Snow White! xoxo