Must love ivory towers!

A Poem by Salar Majak

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i'll lie down for a while,
pretend that time has stopped,
eternity is mine..

i want to stop the watches,
all the world's clocks,
it doesn't exist, time.

Travel around the universe,
see the beautiful wonders,
the world, what it hides!

enjoy every drop of rain,
that makes a little melody,
as it falls from the sky...

free myself from boundries,
my spirit has no limits,
spread my wings and fly...

would you consider me crazy,
if i go like this for ever?
do i even care?

the world is my play ground
sun shining all night long,
and when i want, it rains...

we're all in this together,
don't believe me? close your eyes,
sink to your sacred place....

spend hours in your ivory tower,
amidst the things you love the most,
do you even dare?

pretend! for in our gloomy days,
dreams are the only havens,
where we can really be safe...

dream instead of crying
for the world's wars of misery,
sleep till this madness ends,
keep dreaming..
will it end?

© 2013 Salar Majak

Author's Note

i know that it's not healthy to stay in your ivory tower, away from the world, but it does make you more relaxed, easy. just a point of view :)
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An owl on the moon

Sighed and smiled reading your words. What joys do we lose while crawling through the mud and mire? And how if more could walk into their dreams for awhile, and see what's truly of value; these sacred towers of light. I wish this for a world that seems to live in shadows, in endless sorrows. Dreams, sweet dreams.

Posted 6 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

6 Years Ago

wow! that review was better than the poem itself!Hahahaha
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6 Years Ago

Oh, my friend! How your presence is such a poem! Ah, and your kindness knows no bounds. Let your mus.. read more

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Dr. Wood ?

A great idea expertly portrayed....I think we all suspend time when we write and I know that I drift into some surreal and wonderful world that knows nothing of this fast paced train of existence we are all forced to ride upon..Well done

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 3 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

what an amazing interpretation of a thought, yes, we all are forced to ride on that train aren't we.. read more

quinfinn

fear not, little lady. i spend much of my time, sequestered inside my ivory towered fortress of dreams. this is a truly whimsical and very fun write. well done!

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

thank you Quin!! and ivory towers fortresses of velvet dreams are amazing aren't they ?

11 Years Ago

they have their moments, my dear.

11 Years Ago

Phillitup

dreams have always been a mysterious thing to me... nicely penned. This is provoking and eloquent, nothing short of awesome!!!!!

-Dell

Posted 11 Years Ago

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11 Years Ago

:) Of course. Good to know that someone noticed my disappearance. :)

11 Years Ago

:) of course i did! we all did!, glad you're back!

11 Years Ago

:))))))

I am too

Inda

No it will never end. :/

Seriously though great piece, thought provoking and has a bit of an eerie feel to it. Great Job!

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

11 Years Ago

XD thank you!! glad you got that feeling :P

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Added on March 31, 2013
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Salar Majak

Syria

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