Syrian war is NOT your business

seriously why does every government gets a say in this???

I don't want your pity

I only want to grieve alone..

To cry, with all my heart to scream:

''why did it have to be my home?"'

S**t happens....that I know

but why completely destroyed?

why does it have to be my Syria?

Killed........Abandoned...........alone.......

It'll all be forgotten by the world

like nothing had ever happened

in two or even three years later

maybe a little bit more

Don't dare say I'm wrong!

Remember Vietnam? Iraq?

remember Palestine?

didn't think so, no.

This is why I don't need your pity

or world's governments to play a role

If it's dying... let it die in peace

Death is more merciful than foreigners souls

Don't fight then blame others

this battle is certainly not yours

you'll just turn your backs on us later

after starting a third world war

Forgive me for like this ranting

war strips courage from my core

but the pain of losing my country

hurts too much to be ignored

Author's Note

Russia, America, China, Brittan, the whole world's governments are planning to get into the Syrian war and that'll just make things worse

Reviews

[gabrielle]

I could well understand and feel your position. I am from a country which was colonized for 300 years by foreigners and history reveals that our forefathers had been treated as second class citizens in our own country. After fighting for our freedom my country (or our leaders) allowed itself to surrender a part of its sovereignty to foreign domination. But if only for humanitarian considerations, I do not see anything wrong for other countries to be extending assistance. yet, there is always the possibility that some countries would be extending assistance with a hidden political and economic intentions. This is something every citizen should be alarmed about. Very creative vent. May Peace be with your country.

[Salar Majak]

that is right, every word you said :)
i'm glad you agree and i'm really glad you like it

[Zahra]

I don't know what to say. Iraq, Syria and Allah knows who's next.

[Salar Majak]

true, thanks for reading

[Ali]

Well done, It speaks on my behalf.

[Salar Majak]

thanks i'm glad you like it

[Inda]

I agree, the last thing this country needs is to go into another war. Most of us here don't want that, let's hope that our voices are heard.

[Salar Majak]

let's hop so :) thank you

[MOON]

Powerful read and plea , you hit the nail on the head !

[Salar Majak]

thank you!

[Nia Hope]

I blame imperialist countries like the US and Russia. Clearly tey think that no one is smart or strong enough to fix their problems. Amazing write and I know you said you want to Greece alone but if you need someone to vent to you can always message me :)

[Salar Majak]

thank you Ankara :) i appreciate it

[Baby Ricochet]

Aurora I don't know what to say. There is no solving something as out of control as the Syrian conflict. War fuels itself in a way no one can truly understand until they're caught in the middle of one.

[Salar Majak]

yeah that's absolutely correct, unfortunately
thanks my friend :)

[Riley Bray]

Aurora, watching the news I've definitely come to share your views on the matter. All these countries are so arrogant in believing they can "help" this situation...my country perhaps most of all.This was a lovely poem, though there were a few spelling/grammar errors, so here:

"in to or even three years later"-----this would be "two" :p
Irac is spelled Iraq. xP

Thats it, good job. X3 Youre really improving! Keep writing like this Aurora. x3

[Salar Majak]

thank you Riley, didn't pay much attention to spelling mistakes :O i'll correct them now.

[eatme]

America, Canada, UK, France, Australia, Germany, and to a lesser degree many others...
are SLAVES of Israel.

Israel ordered them to attack.
The Project for the New American Century.
Cheney, former head of an Israeli think tank.
A staged New Pearl Harbor.
The building of greater Israel.
The new temple.

It really comes down to one thing, a really basic thing,
Israel takes as much as it can. In the very very worst scenario, they agree to stop where they are and not take more. They will settler every centimeter of Palestine knowing they get to keep it.
IF THEY CAN... they want lots of Lebanon, lots of Egypt, lots of Syria, lots of Iraq.
How is Israel doing for oil? Great. They sent their slaves to attack Iraq, now the pipelines guarded by the slaves pump to Israeli refineries in Haifa.

Point is: when it stops, their psycho Nazi race nationalism war god fantasy stops.
Can they stop?
No. That is really their defining nature. They hurt their neighbors until their neighbors honestly do GO MAD! and kick them out. Happens every time.
They never ever stop.

The Slaves will destroy Syria for them... OR... Israelis will dress up as Muslims, murder lots of women and kids.. again like all the times before.

Slaves will invade or they will be punished. That is not under debate.

If all people want to start another war for them is a 'red line crossed' by a terror attack that kills women and kid goyim... they are more than happy to provide that. They will gas women and kids till the fat lady sings, if that is all you want to war for them.

In their religion, subhuman goyim mean nothing. 'Even the best of the goyim deserve death'.
They don't have any Christian values to break.

[Salar Majak]

i think you are right, in every word, it pains me to see that all of this is happening and we can't do anything to stop it, nothing.
we just sit and wait for our doom like scared pigeons, oh well, at least pigeons fly.
thank you.

[Mark]

If it helps, there isn't a single American I've heard or read say that we should get involved there. I know the Brits are out. France wants to do something.. but that's a disincentive.. ha.

The American people are fed up and tired of war. Obama promised us he'd get our sons and daughters out of the middle east.

As for Syria, my heart goes out to you and all her people. somewhere let us all pray for solution; for peace.

[Salar Majak]

hopefully there will be peace. i really hope that no one interferes because that will just cause more people to die, and it will become more than one country that suffers

[J. Kell]

This is fantastic work. I completely agree with you. America needs to stop interfering abroad because it is always a disaster and we do more damage than good. So sorry for everything you and your country is going through.

[Salar Majak]

thank you :) i appreciate this